Juan - by Juan carrion
It is not very lame.
Originates from God
It makes me feel kinda odd.
No one I know has that name.
Except my grandpa and it's not a shame.
Juan comes from the name John.
It means a gift from God.
My name comes from my uncle
And my grandfather before.
People seem to think I'm funny
Because all I get is money 😂.
Not one failure will stop me ,
I always keep trying.
Like a bird in the sky ,
I will keep flying.
Juan also means hard worker.
Which is what I am.
Only sometimes because I like
To do things and eat lots of ham.
The lord is gracious ,
Is also what my name means.
I think of it as a blessing ,
To be who I am.
That first rhyme tho Juan is my name it is not very lame
ReplyDeleteI love the rhymes you used, is there anyone else in your family or in your past family that had the name Juan.
ReplyDeleteI liked the diction used in the poem
ReplyDeleteJuan,do you really like ham or was it just to fit the rhyme scheme?
ReplyDeleteYour rhyming was nice and funny.
ReplyDeleteFunny I liked it nice use of those rhymes
ReplyDeleteThat was the best poem ever I loved the rhyme with ham go Juan
ReplyDeleteHow you rhymed money and funny.
ReplyDeleteVery funny. I like the use of rhyme and especially the part about ham.
ReplyDelete"Like a bird in the sky, I will keep flying" is my favorite part of the poem. I really like your use of a similie.
ReplyDeleteYour poem had lots of rhyme, it also had a light-hearted mood.
ReplyDeleteThat one part where you say " people think I'm funny because all I do is get money" that really stood out to me
ReplyDelete"Like a bird in the sky I will keep flying" stood out. I think your writing is great.
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